Ramblin’ On The Run

Ramblin' Blues

I am just saying…
That if it was meant to be,
And it did not,
Then it probably wasn’t me.

Hey, I am just saying…
That if there be pain,
Heart-breaks and cold rain,
Then a smile’s not in vain.

I am just saying…
It better be worth something,
If you’re losing to win,
That game you’re playing.

And I am just saying,
‘Cause I know that speech is free;
But it’s for you to see,
To give a hear or let it be.

Oh and I might be ramblin’,
But yeah I’m thinking this through.
And when things take me tumblin’,
I realize I am on the run too.

I am just saying…
If you been a good daughter or son,
Your Mama’s li’l one,
Your life is far from undone.

Now, I am just saying…
When things turn on you,
Adorn a deep black hue,
Keep a spirited point of view.

I’m just saying…
That if a song makes you happy,
So happy that you cry,
Then sing it till you die.

All I’m saying,
Walk on and walk a thousand mile;
Make it worthwhile,
And crossover in style.

Oh and I might be ramblin’,
But yeah I’m thinking this through.
And when I find myself stumblin’,
I realize I am on the run too.

01
Dee
February 25th, 2010 9:51 am

I’m just saying
That when you put this to tune
I better be hearing it
When I come there in June

:D

Love ya, well done :) I like the walk a thousand mile, para. I get it!

02
Lil bro
February 25th, 2010 8:41 pm

Nice eta…made my morning!!! Coz I have lived 24 yrs of my life hearing you say “But Ravi, I am just saying….” Love u for all that more…me

03
February 25th, 2010 9:16 pm

Love these two lines

When things turn on you,
Adorn a deep black hue

and the one about a song…oh totally yeah…Lukaaa shoooopi :D Aaj ka yeh din…… :D

04
Bhagavathy
February 26th, 2010 12:49 am

[:)][:)][:)]

05
February 26th, 2010 12:55 am

As always, you’ve come out with something simplistic and yet it leaves an impact…keep writing bro

06
Neeta
February 26th, 2010 1:04 am

Its bootiful, Harisio! So much meaning in all the simple words! Super Duper Bear Hugs, n times of course!! :-)

07
T-Major
February 26th, 2010 1:57 am

I liked this one the best:

I am just saying…
It better be worth something,
If you’re losing to win,
That game you’re playing.

:)

08
February 26th, 2010 3:04 am

I am just saying…
If you been a good daughter or son,
Your Mama’s li’l one,
Your life is far from undone.

09
February 26th, 2010 5:07 am

Simple and beautiful! Could totally connect with it!

10
March 1st, 2010 11:57 pm

loved it! too much stuff!! crossover in style!!!

11
March 2nd, 2010 5:09 am

I’m just sayin that this one is a gem. You’ve outdone yourself. :)

Loved the structure and rhythm of the piece. Very controlled writing. Its good-stuff. :P

12
March 18th, 2010 2:47 am

Love these lines-
“I am just saying…
It better be worth something,
If you’re losing to win,
That game you’re playing.”

And I could hear this set to a country tune! U should really get some1 to set it to a tune.

13
TM
June 7th, 2010 11:12 pm

Awesome piece, Haris!

Walk on and walk a thousand mile;
Make it worthwhile

What lines!
Now, please put it to tune. :)

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