Space-poet Spike

Are you a lonely falling star,
Zipping aimlessly through space?
Or a castaway, from a planet far,
Longing for a familiar face?

Are you an unidentified puff of blah;
Or a shiny cosmic pathogen?
A giant hazy nebula;
Or a teensy Protozoan?

Hear ye as I call,
Hailing all known spatial freqs;
Spacecasting Live for all,
Aboard The ISS Poetrix.


This is space-poet Spike,
On his weekly open mic.


There’s nothing but emptiness and dots,
As far as my eyes can see;
So I plan to fill them up with thoughts,
Far beyond many a-galaxy.

Time and space are obscure;
Cause what is mine, isn’t yours.
My words shall transcend them for sure,
Defying reasons, logic, they shall soar.

There’s poetry in how our lives traverse;
Beneath the obvious, something stirs.
It’s really just one big poem, we converse,
Perhaps that’s why we call it The Uni-verse.


This is space-poet Spike
On his weekly open mic.


Now, the show today is dedicated,
To war-torn unknowns,
The luckless and the ill-fated;
The saddened and forlorn.

I don’t have a permanent cure;
Nor I promise to allay your pain.
But I’ll give you few smiles for sure,
And pray that laughter rains.

I will keep sending over
Words of greatness and power,
Deep into the darkness, forever;
So that some day, on you they shall shower!


This is space-poet Spike
On his weekly open mic.

———————————————————————————————-

“Say, I’ve to admit that his rhymes are getting pretty decent!”.

“Hahaha yeah! I agree! I have heard him so many times, that I believe that I too have got a hang of it. Let me try …”


“There goes Spikey, spacin’ out again,
Jumping and rolling all over his beds.
But soon it’ll end, his trips insane;
Cause now it’s time, for his daily meds!”


“Ahahahaha….”

14 Thoughts on “Space-poet Spike

  1. Simply bootiful, Harisio! 🙂
    Indeed, if only all of us understood the ‘Uni-verse’ bit…
    May the words of Spikey fill all the empty spaces in empty hearts & bring unto them cloudbursts of grins & smiles 🙂

  2. Nice one….Good artwork tooo 😀

  3. All pensive this time are we…but the last two paras are buoyant! I especially like the Uni-verse deduction and feel like stealing “an unidentified puff of blah” for my bio 😀

  4. brilliant

  5. too much man… super artistic.. 🙂

    awesumm..

  6. :O :O :O This is divine. I’m like, super liking it 😀 And that artwork is still my desktop! 🙂 Amazing work Spikey!!

  7. I just read it again and liked it again and now i am commenting again…

  8. Spikedelik on September 21, 2010 at 9:20 pm said:

    @Neeeeeeeeeta * deep bow * That really meant a lot! Thanx!

    @Li’lBro Arigatou Ravi-chan

    @Mansi Super thanx! And yeah feel free to use the phrase 😀

    @Nikhil Thanx dude 🙂

    @Mehul Thank bhai!!! \m/

    @Dee Ab kya bolun, so much lhou! * Spikey melts! *

    @Li’l Bro Arigatou Ravi-chan again! 😛

  9. Hearted the artwork baby 🙂

    Lovely lovely heartfelt words too ….huguuh

  10. spaceman spikey! i loved it. and especially the way things change in the last paras. write on, write on.

  11. Good stuff as usual harii..
    Super Artwork too….
    Couldnt pick a fav line…coz every line was better than the previous… 🙂

  12. Spikedelik on September 29, 2010 at 1:59 am said:

    @Kits Superrrrr thanx babes! Hugguh right back!

    @Fuzzy Hehehe thanx a ton fuzz-man! I will I will 🙂

    @Sri Yayyyyy! I hope that trend happens with every poem I write as well. 🙂

  13. shefalighanekar@gmail.com on May 12, 2011 at 12:37 am said:

    Superb as ususal..
    Specially loved the Are you an unidentified puff of blah;
    I feel like tht sometime…

  14. what to say realy amazing
    just like i heard from your mom
    about this blog
    very nice continue writting
    may almighty bless you

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